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kt Class March 17, 2011

Dear Scholars,

We worked on and performed several skits in class on Thursday. Please continue to write. If someone else would like to post notes, the recording of the class is available here: http://www.wiziq.com/online-class/496435-advanced-writing-and-college-prep-english-march-17-2011

I have not had time to do thorough notes for the Thursday class as I have been working on a new chapter for the next edition of our college prep textbook.
The vocabulary story does not have a glossary yet and the playsheet does not have an answer key, but I’m sure you can figure those out. Please let me know if I have made any major errors.

Be sure to get your copy of the class literary journal from the EIE store.

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kt Advanced Writing Class agenda March 17, 2011. Our literary journal, skits revisited, cheese

Dear Scholars,

Screen sharing didn’t work last week. We’ll make sure to fix that. Last week’s feed and recording is here: http://www.wiziq.com/online-class/491022-advanced-writing-and-college-prep-english-march-10-2011

Class feed this week will he here: http://www.wiziq.com/online-class/496435-advanced-writing-and-college-prep-english-march-17-2011

Copies of our Advanced Writing Class Literary Journal for fall will be available at EIE this week thanks to Adrian’s excellent production work. You should all have copies for your academic portfolios. We will discuss this issue and our next issue. Much credit goes to Angela, Adrian and all of you for your excellent work on our first issue. Unfortunately, not everyone had pieces in this issue due to its theme and to space considerations. We will try to make sure that everyone is represented in the next one. It may be possible to have it printed by and available on Amazon.com.

Last week, after a brief discussion of part time jobs, the topic presented by Breana, the subject of skits arose and the suggestion was made that we do the cheese shop sketch and write further skits.

Angela has written a very nice skit on the composition of the Gettysburg Address. A perfect example, and a place to start.

Cheese shop
I’m sure you’ve all looked the skits posted in the Skit Section of our classroom. Our Cheese Shop classroom page has now been expanded to include a full script of the sketch together with an account of how it was inspired and a table of all cheeses mentioned. Please everyone watch The Cheese Shop. We will do one or more readthroughs of this sketch. It’s actually trickier than one might think, but very worthwhile.

A Scriptwriting forum has been created in the classroom. Please post ideas and scripts.

Reading and listening resources from last week.

If you have time, please give these a try.

Bertrand Russell on the Atomic Bomb. 1945
This is quite short but brilliantly insightful.

On Liberty by John Stuart Mill
This is a quite long and difficult but very significant work.

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Advanced Writing Class notes March 9, 2011. Persuasive essays, our literary journal, skits revisited

Dear Scholars,

This week Breana presented the debate topic: Is it a good idea for high-school students to have part time jobs? We discussed it briefly, but then the topic changed. We can pursue this topic more later.
Writing class journal
Adrian brought in a sample of the historical fiction issue of the Advanced Writing Class Literary journal. He has done a superb job handling the layout, duplication and binding. Much credit goes to Angela, Adrian and all of you for your excellent work on our first issue. Unfortunately, not everyone had pieces in this issue due to its theme and to space considerations. We will try to make sure that everyone is represented in the next one. There will be a limited number of copies available at the EIE bookstore next Thursday. You should all have copies for your academic portfolios.
Cheese shop
McKenna joined our class for the first time and made some excellent suggestions including a request that we act out the Cheese Shop skit — and, after some discussion of the subject, we decided to revisit the topic of skit writing. Please look at the skits posted in the Skit Section of our classroom. Our Cheese Shop classroom page has now been expanded to include a full script of the sketch together with an account of how it was inspired and a table of all cheeses mentioned. Please everyone watch The Cheese Shop.

A Scriptwriting forum has been created in the classroom. Please post ideas. This could be a lot of fun.

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Advanced Writing Class agenda: The part-time job debate

Dear Scholars,

Last week’s recording (http://www.wiziq.com/online-class/486036-advanced-writing-and-college-prep-english-march-3-2011) had screen sharing problems but the audio seemed to work.

This week’s class feed and recording will be here: http://www.wiziq.com/online-class/491022-advanced-writing-and-college-prep-english-march-10-2011

We are continuing with the subject of persuasive essays and debates. These have been very lively and informative. Breana has submitted this week’s topic: The advisability of high-school students holding down part-time jobs. Please come with ideas.

There have been some very good vocabulary postings. Make sure to read them and learn the words. Would a quiz help?

Projects to cover:
Sam’s The Outlaws of Sherwood
Dorothy’s persuasive essay on texting
Amanda’s persuasive essay on television and health
Dorothy’s essay on vitamins and dancers
Sam’s vocabulary
Amanda’s vocabulary
Marc’s historical fiction

Note: there have been no postings of lectures and debates lately. There have been some good lectures presented by Fry, and Hitchens was interviewed on 60 minutes recently, but some content makes these inappropriate for our purposes in class. You may look them up on your own if you like. I have found very little new material from the other great speakers, Berlinski, Eagleton, Miller, Fisk etc. Please contribute to classroom resources by posting articles and lectures if you find good material.

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Collaborative Learning

Fry speaks on learning outside the classroom with fellow students in a collaborative homeschooling (or dormschooling) environment and with enthusiasm for the learning process.


Watch the entire lecture:


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Writing class supplemental


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Advanced Writing and College Prep English Class, fall 2010

Our Advanced Writing and College Prep English Class meets in Monrovia, CA and online and is intended to provide college bound homeschoolers with language preparation on a level rarely approached in public school. Consistent with homeschooling principles, our purpose is to achieve educational goals without rendering the subject matter distasteful. This is not always possible, but we do our best.

Grading is based upon the completion of “acceptable projects” which may take many forms including short stories, verse, dialog, reports, correspondence and many others.

It is our intent to make the class lecture visible to remote students in realtime. This technology is still a bit tenuous and unpredictable but does work well when properly functional.

Required equipment for the class:

  1. Access to an Internet-connected computer with a web browser, Adobe Acrobat Reader, and a good word processor (browser, Acrobat Reader, and word processor are all free for the download. See our recommended software page).

  2. An English Dictionary and Thesaurus.

  3. A willingness to consider difficult and unfamiliar material as more a challenge than an obstacle.

For this class we make a few basic assumptions:

  • It’s never wrong to use language well.

  • If you can write well, it’s always easy to “write down” to your readers if necessary.

  • It is an insult and a disservice to your readers to assume them always to be either uneducated in English, illiterate, or demented.

Course philosophy:

The ubiquitous admonition to “write for your audience” has often been construed to mean “dumb your writing down to a level at which it can’t possibly confuse, mislead, challenge, or inspire anyone.” The first book I wrote, a computer textbook, had had its language so thoroughly eviscerated by the editors of Dryden Press that the final product little resembled the original work. The fact that a college text must ineluctably be written as though intended for an audience of seven-year-olds, is demeaning both to author and reader, and it reflects a growing tendency, at least within the US, to abandon, suppress, and prevent the perpetuation of much that is great about the English language itself – nonetheless, such are the guidelines most publishers follow. It is therefore not in the least surprising that many ostensibly “educated” individuals rarely encounter, and scarcely ever use, more than the most basic rudiments of the English language. This is not to say that skill in sophisticated verbal expression is not needed for college nor for the SAT, TOEFL, and AP college preparatory exams, only that, in an environment of simplistic and popularized usage, such skill is hard to acquire and one must make an effort to find and study it.

In this class we will be exploring erudition as well as form, style, vocabulary, syntax and semantics. Have a dictionary handy.

Learning writing online in a supportive, collegial environment.

English writing classes, traditional and online

Writing can be an utterly jubilant activity, but a significant level of creative ecstasy is rarely encountered by highschool-aged students and is very nearly impossible to achieve in the traditional school environment.

Experience in most high school classrooms (using the mass-production educational model and presided over by often well-meaning but uninspired pedants) so often prompts one to conclude that essay writing is always something decidedly distasteful. The essay, however, can be an eye-opening opportunity for endless creativity and variation, whose flexibility and expressive potential is limited only by the writer’s ability to weave cogent content into a dazzling fabric of felicitous diction — well, perhaps it needn’t always go that far, but the point stands: essay writing is what one makes of it and the more one does, the better one gets and the easier and more enjoyable it becomes. This is the philosophy that our Writing classes espouse and implement.

A different approach to the acquisition of writing skill

It is very hard to generate enthusiasm for writing when one’s labor results only in an ephemeral entity whose sole purpose for existence is to be the subject of a cursory critical evaluation and a single mark in a grade book. Essay writing is often much more exciting and interesting when one is writing for an audience and not just for a teacher who will glance over the paper quickly, make a few red marks, and return it. Unfortunately, few alternatives to uninspired and anemic instructional mediocrity exist, though alternatives are emerging, one example being this class, in which everyone has the opportunity to write for an audience — for the class as a whole, the teacher, and ultimately, after some honing and revision, for a larger audience of fellow students and parents, for the public in web and print media, and for inclusion in individual student portfolios.

The value of an online writing class

A class grade in an accredited highschool is certainly of some value, but it becomes somewhat feeble when placed next to a portfolio of published works whose message and mastery are directly evident to the observer. Such a tangible record of student achievement is far more compelling than a simple letter on a piece of paper reflecting a perfunctory perusal and a possibly skewed evaluation by an only marginally interested and probably harried and preoccupied instructor.

An evolved didactic process

For nearly ten years, our College Preparatory English class has been held largely online, with all handouts and assignment submission taking place in an online classroom, but with a weekly traditional classroom meeting in which corrected papers, grammar, writing style, and spoken language are analyzed and discussed. Now with full online application sharing, together with full audio and video, online students may participate equally with classroom students.

Would I want to take, or have my children take, an online writing class?

Many traditional and online grammar and writing resources are at best uninspired and at worst, misleading and error ridden (See SAT grammar errors found on educational websites). We feel that polished formal standard English should dominate in the classroom, in both written and spoken examples, for emulation is one of the most powerful pedagogical devices and it is a crime to use it to propagate errors and misusages. At the same time, there is no reason for grammar and writing study to be dry and boring (see our writing skills playsheets for a taste of the classroom teaching style.) Parents are always welcome in class, space permitting. The one-room schoolhouse paradigm is used with students of multiple ages and abilities working and studying together.

  • Correct and sophisticated language study
  • Writing for personal enjoyment
  • Writing with a purpose and for an audience



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Hearing and Speaking Well are Key to Writing Well. Lecture resources

Resources for taking advantage of a child’s auditory learning ability

The questions are:

  1. What language are children hearing?
  2. What language do we want them to be learning?
  3. How do we present useful auditory learning matter?

Though children learn easily through hearing and thereby quickly gain a visceral feel for the flow and meanders of well crafted prose — if that is what they encounter — they just as easily pick up whatever auditory flotsam and detritus our popular culture throws their way. This is inevitable, but we just have to make sure that they have heard some worthwhile things as well.

Starting with our Children’s Book Page, we have been trying to collect those works which will best serve children during those childhood years of peak language acquisition and acquaint them with good vocabulary and language usage — language which, when assimilated, will benefit them in school, college, and throughout their lives. This has been expanded to include audio works for very young children, and for highly accomplished English speakers seeking to expand their abilities. This page has been specifically created for you and links to all of these. While there is no guarantee that lectures, even those from ivy league universities, will demonstrate perfect or inspired language, there are indeed a number of scholars whose unscripted speech is invariably flawless, beautiful and sublimely conceived, and which could go into print anywhere without any editing at all. I have found a fairly good collection of this online and am adding more all the time.

Spoken English Examples: Lectures
Chosen from many sources specifically for their use of language. Many university professors do not express themselves well and often commit common grammar and stylistic errors in their unscripted speech. Some speakers, however, do produce superbly crafted prose which no editor could improve upon. We have attempted to find these.
Spoken English Examples: Audio Books
This is material which has gone through an editorial process which has, in theory, eliminated any grammatical and stylistic errors. There remains, however, a wide array of styles from the superb to the barely literate. We have made an effort to find those examples which demonstrate the use of English as an art form, recordings which, if listened to repeatedly, cannot fail to improve the listener’s understanding and appreciation of well-crafted English.
Spoken English Examples: Children’s Audio Books
This is the audio counterpart to our Children’s Book page, which strives to provide access to children’s literature which demonstrates the best possible use of English expression.

Online writing course

Free University Resources

English Literacy
A discussion of literacy issues for the homeschooler
What is Correct English?
The big question — with answers.
Dangers of Online English
Why online English study is fraught with pitfalls.
Formal Written English
A good article on the universality of generic English
Use of “Like” has Illustrious Precedent
How Oxford scholars and valley girls suffer from the same like “verbal tic” as it were.
What is Standard Edited Written English
Grammar points tested for on the SAT
Examples of “SAT errors” found in educational websites that teach English or writing skills.

Examples of “SAT errors” in the speech of educated Americans: My younger daughter took a college astronomy class. Together with the text there is a DVD which included short presentations by many eminent astronomers. Interestingly, SAT errors are committed frequently by the American astronomers, far more than by the Belgian, German or British scientists. In this country there seems to be little effort given to polishing one’s informal spoken language. This shows so clearly even in the speech of the highly educated, and is certainly reflected in the words of the young.

For example: The redundancy, sometimes called the pleonasm.

“…[we are] producing an ever increasingly more sophisticated model of the universe.”

These are acceptable:

An ever increasingly sophisticated model

An ever more sophisticated model

“How much more repetitively superfluously tautologically redundant can we make it?” “An ever, further, extensively, increasingly, more sophisticated model”

Or mismatched parallelism (in this case gerund/infinitive mismatch) such as:

“…[they were] less interested in answering the scientific questions than to support the emperor’s power.”

This problem can be best demonstrated by expanding the parallel constructs out:

They were interested in answering the scientific questions.

They were interested to support the emperor’s power.

Or a statement that simply does not say what the speaker means: “… This stellar body emits two streams of energy on either side.” Of course, what is meant is: “… This stellar body emits two streams of energy, one on either side.” This demonstrates another critical aspect of good language. Well crafted language means what it is supposed to mean. Sloppy language is at best imprecise and frequently thoroughly misleading. ["X times more than" tangent.]

These are all classic SAT errors of the sort that are addressed on almost every SAT exam. The mangling of language is even more common of course in spoken lectures in secondary school classrooms, but this kind of error is very rarely heard in the speech of Foreign academics and virtually never in the language of British scholars.

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Homeschooling Classes in English, German, Music in Monrovia and online

Informal, collegial workshops in English, German and music for homeschoolers (College Preparatory English, German conversation,  and Keyboard Music Theory) are being taught by homeschooling parent (and college professor) K. Titchenell to mixed age students (See Advantages of the one-room schoolhouse approach to teaching).

Classes are open enrollment and meet on Wednesday mornings at the EIE Homeschooling Center (2640 S. Myrtle Ave. Monrovia, CA 91016 626 821-0025), but the English class also takes place all week in a virtual classroom, with some students working entirely online (See Online Writing Class).  Classes qualify for funding under Sky Mountain Charter School and are reasonably priced (with accommodation available when needed. See pages above for pricing.)

There is no charge to observe.  Contact the teacher (eieclass(at)abacus-es.com)

) to audit or to participate in the online classroom.

Homeschooling in Action
(the Keyboard Music Theory class )

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